Winter Halo- 22/10/10

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Miracles are rare
I stand and stare
In a sky that is bare
On a full moon day!


No stars to adorn
No clouds it has worn
Oh why does it mourn?
On a full moon day…


But then up high
My eyes did fly
On the tallest sky
What a wonderful day!


The moon sat petite
Very proudly lit
A beaming grit
On its own birthday…

Enclosed in a ring
Under a protective wing
Of a big faint lining
On a pitch black bay.


Its engagingly crisp
It stunningly grips
Your eyes in a fix
A FULL MOON WITHIN AN ECLIPSE.

PS: photography by Neha Naik. Thanks neha! :-)




Comments

  1. Pratik Desai23 October 2010 at 01:06

    Nice poem.

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  2. Sagar23 October 2010 at 02:26

    Heey Deepti, Nice one. Dulcet :)

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  3. Amruta23 October 2010 at 03:58

    :) good flow... nice one...

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  4. Neha Sardesai23 October 2010 at 06:40

    Tres bien mon cherie!!!

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  5. Apoorva23 October 2010 at 06:56

    hey good one!
    Neha Naik's photography is amazing!!

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  6. Sharvari23 October 2010 at 10:00

    Nice poem....Deepti tai..!!
    n Amazing snap...!!

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  7. chai23 October 2010 at 12:29

    really a good one!!!!!!!!!
    liked it very much......

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  8. DEEPTI24 October 2010 at 04:13

    :-) Thankyou everyone... I hope you'll did not miss the moon that day!

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  9. ruj24 October 2010 at 09:11

    hey its awesum!!!!!!!!
    @neha naik:photography is too gud

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  10. swaroop29 October 2011 at 23:22

    hey, nice one, the last line is a bit confusing, the poem describes full moon day very nicely, but suddenly eclipse appeared. ( I feel that eclipse can also be highlighted in the earlier stanzas)

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